This sounds really good! Nice hardstyle kick and melody. Melody is not fully in tune I think. You could try http://www.scales-chords.com/scalefin der.php to make sure you use the right notes!
Nice techno beat!
Hardstyle should be around 150BPM and your kick needs working yes. You're bass is pushing the melody down so you should sidechain it a bit more or turn the volume down. Gets quite repetitive at the end.
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